and thanks for being specific on what kind of feedback you want to hear...
- the surround...
it's about the food, but the setting / context is very much a part of the story
it's good to focus in, but also include some perspective
... and behind the scenes photos as well... the sushi chef is always interesting
add a personal touch to the photos... many times I add a personal item as a recurring theme
include the chopstick holders, ginger bowl, a tea mug in the photo
- the lighting and set-up...
back/side lighting can add depth, move the plate higher or lower
... change the angle, put something under the corner of the plate
choose where to sit or visit the shop at different times of the day for lighting variation
use something to create a reflection or a white napkin to create a light shadow
use DOF to create interest
use post processing to add contrast / pop
- focus on the food...
If the food doesn't look interesting to you in the shop, no one else will be touched by the photo
the single sushi feels so alone, pile a couple of different ones on the same plate, create a scene
dribble (drool) some shōyu on the fish to get some contrast, reflection, depth
this is art, not a photo for the menu... it can be a made up photo... it's not reality
how about a photo of the plastic food near the restaurant entrance
and above all have fun... talk to the people at the counter and maybe get a photo of them enjoying the meal... if you're having fun it comes across in the photos...
Yes, it's about the food and technique, but as all things Asian, there is a lot going on in the background
... don't forget to enjoy the meal ;-)
Casey